Tuesday, July 27, 2010
Term three goal
My term three goal is to become a level three in independence.
Here are my strategies to achieve it:
1. Check my homework book for SDL that I have not done
2. Don't muck around in SDL time.
3. Remember to bring my homework book home and back to school
SA: What did I learn? To become a level three I have to be completely devoted to completing my homework every day.
What did I do well? I tried really, really hard.
What is my next learning step? to get ninety percent in my homework.
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
Homefun total for term two
My Home fun percentage for term two is 74%. I am very proud of this score because I almost doubled my term one score of 40%.
Tuesday, July 20, 2010
Term two goal
My term two goal was to be more organized. I think I achieved my goal because my desk is tidy and I am getting better at meeting deadlines.
Expert
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
Really great PI, Libby. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. We enjoyed your humour, your descriptions, the pictures you've created with your words... Fantastic - and a huge step up from last term.-TC
It was a good PI Libby, Some of the writing was a bit hard to read with the backgrounds and colours of writing. The describtive writing was very good and well writ out. Good Work Libby, Next time maybe not too much sound effects and make writing easier to read!- Britt, Haddels and Barry
i think the stories were great i liked the mum and dad. CONGRATS LIBBY :-), They were great stories and I liked the humor in them.- Linda and Hannah
great job your storys were really cool but next time chose a different colour for the writing.- Sara,Sophie
very good writing Libby loo I like picturing your descriptions and you u write so honest (Karina)Your humor is good to read I think if you had read it to us I would have understood it
better.(Harry)
good PI Libby you had a lot of writing next time maybe you could use more bright colours and information but other than that congrats!!!!!!!!!!!- Mike and Egg
good work Libby we thought you had a good pi but next time try make the writing easier to read- Caleb, Kale
That was so cool Libby i really liked the skiing story.- Alana and Emma
Well done Libby!!!! It is better than your last one and lots of humourise writing!- Oliver and Chaz
Amazing writing Libby we think you achieved a lot. But next time make the writing easy a to read and tell us more info about writing- Luce and Zia
great pi and cool stories you put lots of work into it but next time make your backgrounds not plain but just easy to read- Kate and Grace
Some very humorous writing and great use of vocabulary Libby. Well Done! I loved the one about your persuasive dog.- Louise Morris
It was a good PI Libby, Some of the writing was a bit hard to read with the backgrounds and colours of writing. The describtive writing was very good and well writ out. Good Work Libby, Next time maybe not too much sound effects and make writing easier to read!- Britt, Haddels and Barry
i think the stories were great i liked the mum and dad. CONGRATS LIBBY :-), They were great stories and I liked the humor in them.- Linda and Hannah
great job your storys were really cool but next time chose a different colour for the writing.- Sara,Sophie
very good writing Libby loo I like picturing your descriptions and you u write so honest (Karina)Your humor is good to read I think if you had read it to us I would have understood it
better.(Harry)
good PI Libby you had a lot of writing next time maybe you could use more bright colours and information but other than that congrats!!!!!!!!!!!- Mike and Egg
good work Libby we thought you had a good pi but next time try make the writing easier to read- Caleb, Kale
That was so cool Libby i really liked the skiing story.- Alana and Emma
Well done Libby!!!! It is better than your last one and lots of humourise writing!- Oliver and Chaz
Amazing writing Libby we think you achieved a lot. But next time make the writing easy a to read and tell us more info about writing- Luce and Zia
great pi and cool stories you put lots of work into it but next time make your backgrounds not plain but just easy to read- Kate and Grace
Some very humorous writing and great use of vocabulary Libby. Well Done! I loved the one about your persuasive dog.- Louise Morris
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