Really great PI, Libby. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. We enjoyed your humour, your descriptions, the pictures you've created with your words... Fantastic - and a huge step up from last term.-TC

It was a good PI Libby, Some of the writing was a bit hard to read with the backgrounds and colours of writing. The describtive writing was very good and well writ out. Good Work Libby, Next time maybe not too much sound effects and make writing easier to read!- Britt, Haddels and Barry

i think the stories were great i liked the mum and dad. CONGRATS LIBBY :-), They were great stories and I liked the humor in them.- Linda and Hannah

great job your storys were really cool but next time chose a different colour for the writing.- Sara,Sophie

very good writing Libby loo I like picturing your descriptions and you u write so honest (Karina)Your humor is good to read I think if you had read it to us I would have understood it
better.(Harry)

good PI Libby you had a lot of writing next time maybe you could use more bright colours and information but other than that congrats!!!!!!!!!!!- Mike and Egg

good work Libby we thought you had a good pi but next time try make the writing easier to read- Caleb, Kale

That was so cool Libby i really liked the skiing story.- Alana and Emma

Well done Libby!!!! It is better than your last one and lots of humourise writing!- Oliver and Chaz

Amazing writing Libby we think you achieved a lot. But next time make the writing easy a to read and tell us more info about writing- Luce and Zia

great pi and cool stories you put lots of work into it but next time make your backgrounds not plain but just easy to read- Kate and Grace

Some very humorous writing and great use of vocabulary Libby. Well Done! I loved the one about your persuasive dog.- Louise Morris